Jon Brosio
Jon Brosio

@jonbrosio

15 Tweets 18 reads Jul 04, 2022
I've studied over 200 landing pages from Twitter's top creators,
98% of them use the same formula to persuade visitors to buy.
Steal this proven 8-part framework (to print money like the pros):
In this thread, you'll learn:
• The 8 essential elements of a high-conversion landing page
• Each element broken down with real-world examples
• How to implement these and build your own landing page
Let's go!
1. A clear outcome
You must tell your page visitor:
• WHO this is for
• WHAT it is about
• WHY they should care
In plain language.
Confuse the visitor and you lose the sale.
Borrow the copy from @theoohene here:
@theoohene 2. A nagging problem
Paint a vivid picture the visitor deals with.
Be as clear as possible. Refrain from being clever.
Depict the cruel reality the page visitor is dealing with.
I love this example from @dickiebush and @Nicolascole77
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 3. Consequence magnification
You can't just highlight the problem – you need to amplify how it affects the page visitor's life.
Use:
• Data
• Examples
• Storytelling
To magnify what happens when unsolved.
@writingtoriches has a great example in the landing page body.
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches 4. a "solution" story
Describe how the problem can be solved.
This can either be how:
• You solved the problem
• New tech has created a solution
• Someone has solved it in the past
Use stories to illustrate "secrets" or strategies used.
@ItsKieranDrew is perfect here.
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew 5. Social proof
You now need real-world evidence that this offer works.
Use:
• Referrals
• Testimonials
• Case studies
To show that real people/businesses have used this and seen real results.
@KurtisHanni is thinking outside the box with this example of social proof.
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni 6. A clear offer
You have to promote what you're selling.
Explicitly layout:
• Dates (if applicable)
• How it will be received
• The features and benefits
• Modules, tools, supplies, etc.
Everything to describe the offer in full.
@thedankoe clearly labels his offer:
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni @thedankoe 7. An ultimatum
At this point, the customer has two options:
They purchase:
✅ Problem solved
OR if they don't take action:
❌ Problem persists
This "hard sell" motivates the visitor to take action.
Example: @WrongsToWrite
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni @thedankoe @WrongsToWrite 8. Objection eliminator
People will always make excuses to not buy.
Eliminate those excuses with an FAQ:
• Recap the offer
• Reinforce the value
• Eliminate "knee jerk" objections
@thejustinwelsh touches on every aspect in his FAQ
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni @thedankoe @WrongsToWrite @thejustinwelsh *Important note*
If you were paying attention, you might have noticed something...
The common "formula" being used by the top creators on Twitter is the:
• P
• A
• S
• T
• O
• R
Formula.
(problem, amplify, story, testimonial, offer, response).
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni @thedankoe @WrongsToWrite @thejustinwelsh This copywriting formula works to build a landing page that converts.
From top to bottom, add in the sections piece by piece to create a succinct and clear offer.
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni @thedankoe @WrongsToWrite @thejustinwelsh And that's it!
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1. Follow me @jonbrosio for more badass threads like this
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@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni @thedankoe @WrongsToWrite @thejustinwelsh TL;DR
The 8-part framework to build a landing page that sells like crazy:
• Magnification
• Social proof
• Ultimatum
• Eliminator
• Outcome
• Problem
• Story
• Offer
@theoohene @dickiebush @Nicolascole77 @writingtoriches @ItsKieranDrew @KurtisHanni @thedankoe @WrongsToWrite @thejustinwelsh If you're ready to start building your audience but don't know where to start...
Check out my beginner-friendly guidebook I wrote to generate my first $3,000 a month publishing my thoughts online
(Even if you have a tiny following)
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