Elephchild🐘
Elephchild🐘

@ElephchildCopy

21 Tweets 6 reads Jun 17, 2023
I’ve visited more than 450 Twitter accounts from Jan - Sept. 
And I found out that most people suck at writing a compelling bio. 
But here are 4 best pointers on how to craft yours…
To make a great first impression. 
A Thread 🧵
You see, you’ve been posting valuable content on Twitter. 
But still, people are not following you.
And clients are not saying “hi” (in your dm) - 
Anyway, the first mistake you’re making is:
❌ You have been writing CV in your bio (which is old-school)
Listen. 
Academic positions are not the best way to stand out. 
In fact, using: 
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“I went to University of Chunking will get you aired/ignored”
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So please, stop telling people what is not related to your skill
(mine is copyTHINKING). 
Flat out, your bio should sound like…
“How a pretty lady will give a trustworthy man...
...the expensive hug - which other guys can’t get easily”.
A Quick Guide::
You are a copywriter (no doubt).
But always aim to be a master seducer.
Next:
❌ You’re not telling them what you’ve achieved.
You see, we live in a funny world. 
And people want to be friends with someone of influence. 
In fact, it might look like they are selfish. 
But no, it is 100% natural.
And 99.99% of people will only follow you...
...because of what they can get from you. 
So if you sit, and you think deeply…
Then you’ll surely come up with what you’ve done for humanity.
But Note: 
It should be related to your skill. 
And if you can’t come up with one solid achievement…
Then the next pointer is screaming….
❌ You are not telling them what you’re currently building.
Look - let them know why you are here.
And be open to everyone...
The digital mansion you’ve been spending your time on.
You see, you don’t even know who will read your bio…
…when they set their 2 eyes on your quality message. 
And it will be a slap on your soft cheek...
...to allow them feel disappointed (by showing them a weak bio).
So - c’mon!
Feel free to relate with other copywriters to check your message for you. 
Because your 2 eyes might say:
“This is fxcking amazing”.
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But when you show another trained-eyes…
Then you’ll be able to fix your message (properly) and grow from there.
So here is my question: 
If you’re not connecting with great minds…
Then how do you get someone with trained eyes to help you out? 
That is it.
And the next most important pointer is that…
People will always ask you question (like):
❌ Hey Copywriter, Why Should I Follow You?
And the moment you take this for granted…
Then I don’t want to say all your efforts are gonna be wasted.
But what if there is no more space to add more words? 
Fret not!
Here are what I will strongly recommend:
✅ Make sure your answers are short
✅ Make everything so simple
✅ Make it super specific
✅ Use emoji to replace some words
(example: use flag to replace your country name)
✅ Buy words with picture (if it is vital)
✅ Dramatize some parts with color (optional)
And if you think your bio is still not enough to contain some important info…
Then use your banner to showcase your work, your personality, 
Or any valuable thing you’re currently building.
And here is a word of caution:
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❌ Don’t fake it
❌ Don’t brag
❌ Don’t be disrespectful
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In fact, to make people feel comfortable to DM you…
Then indicate it.
Godspeed.
It's time for you to write a benefit driven Twitter Bio.
And please: -
Retweet the first tweet to help others find this thread -
Follow me at @ElephchildCopy For more actionable tips on sales and marketing.
Sadly, some people want to learn how to make money online...
But they don't have money for expensive programs.
Anyway, it will end today (if you're interested).
Solution?
Check my bio & get my 100% FREE mini copywriting course (available for a limited time only)
Good-luck☀️

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