Oliver Kenyon | CRO
Oliver Kenyon | CRO

@oliverkenyon

9 Tweets 1 reads Jan 14, 2023
Optimization by Oliver #15 ๐Ÿš€
SALESFORCE!
Just imagine if a company of Salesforce's size could increase their customer sign up conversion rates from a few simple tweaks?
Well guess what, they can.....
Here's how i'd increase conversion rates!
Brand: @salesforce
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Optimization by Oliver ๐Ÿš€: My aim is to visually show you how I would improve conversion rates, in this thread i'll breakdown:
1. What we changed and why it should help conversions
2. Before and after designs
3. Subtle changes that can make huge differences
Let's go ๐Ÿ‘‡
1. Make that headline even more enticing!
โŒ Before: A really nice headline but the word "grow" insinuates a steady and slow process.
โœ… After: Instead we've used the buzzword "Skyrocket" to excite our audience and also put a timeframe on it "30 days" to create urgency.
2. Boring paragraphs > bullet points
โŒ Before: I bet you more than 50% of people don't even read the sub headline as it's small and bland.
โœ… After: Turn it into 3 hard hitting benefit driven bullet points and bold keywords to force peoples attention and get them reading it!
3. Keep your actions direct response
โŒ Before: Start trial, watch demo, try for free! 3 conflicting call to actions all fighting for attention.
โœ… After: Instead, we focus on the one thing that drives revenue, a sign up. Always have you buttons span full width and add "now".
4. Where's the social proof?
โŒ Before: One of the biggest companies in the world and I had to google how many users they have!
โœ… After: Shove that social proof down peoples throats! Easily achieved by adding one line of text and some nice profile pictures of real people.
5. Even more social proof
โŒ Before: As above, the whole site lacks social proof. Please don't tell me they don't need it as they're so big, it's not about that!
โœ… After: Showcase some of their unicorn clients and entice more. Unicorns attract unicorns. ๐Ÿฆ„
TL;DR
๐Ÿš€ Use buzz words and numbers in headlines
๐Ÿš€ Turn boring text into hard bullet points
๐Ÿš€ Have one clear call to action for the main thing
๐Ÿš€ Always add social proof
๐Ÿš€ Show off your biggest customers above the fold
That's all from todays Optimization by Oliver. If you enjoyed this please follow @oliverkenyon and retweet. ๐Ÿ™
@salesforce implement these and give me 0.0001% of uplift ๐Ÿค‘
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