Bad writing:
Earned: $23 in 60 days.
Good writing:
Earned: $13,745 in 45 days.
What makes the difference?
Fluff.
Here are the 7 words you should avoid using if you want to make $$$$$:
Earned: $23 in 60 days.
Good writing:
Earned: $13,745 in 45 days.
What makes the difference?
Fluff.
Here are the 7 words you should avoid using if you want to make $$$$$:
1. I think
When you add “I think” it makes your writing weak and positions you as a “not sure” writer.
Want to strengthen your words?
Remove "I think" from your writing.
❌I think 99% of the writers don’t make money
✅99% of the writers don’t make money
See the difference.
When you add “I think” it makes your writing weak and positions you as a “not sure” writer.
Want to strengthen your words?
Remove "I think" from your writing.
❌I think 99% of the writers don’t make money
✅99% of the writers don’t make money
See the difference.
2. That
I remove this word 99% of the time.
It doesn’t add any extra value.
I do use this word when I think it’s important.
❌ This is the thing that people don't get.
âś… This is the thing people don't get.
I remove this word 99% of the time.
It doesn’t add any extra value.
I do use this word when I think it’s important.
❌ This is the thing that people don't get.
âś… This is the thing people don't get.
3. Really
Only use this word when you force on something.
But in general, I don't use "really" often.
But as I said I do use this word when I force something on my sentence.
Now you can ask me: Ohh really?
That’s how I use it.
Only use this word when you force on something.
But in general, I don't use "really" often.
But as I said I do use this word when I force something on my sentence.
Now you can ask me: Ohh really?
That’s how I use it.
4. Very
When you write "very" in your writing it makes your writing very bad.
I never use this word in my writing.
And you shouldn’t too.
It doesn’t add any extra value to your writing but takes up space in your writing.
That's it.
When you write "very" in your writing it makes your writing very bad.
I never use this word in my writing.
And you shouldn’t too.
It doesn’t add any extra value to your writing but takes up space in your writing.
That's it.
You can also replace the word "very" with other words.
Use a website called loosethevery dot com
It helps you find synonyms of very.
❌ You’re looking very handsome
✅You’re looking handsome
Use a website called loosethevery dot com
It helps you find synonyms of very.
❌ You’re looking very handsome
✅You’re looking handsome
5. Just
Overuse or misuse of this word makes your writing boring.
- Just you need to do this.
- Just you’ve to do that.
- Just make sure you do this.
- Just make more money to buy freedom
So on…
It's fluff.
Overuse or misuse of this word makes your writing boring.
- Just you need to do this.
- Just you’ve to do that.
- Just make sure you do this.
- Just make more money to buy freedom
So on…
It's fluff.
Don’t use “Just” to just make your writing cool.
Avoid it.
Although there are certain moments when you can use this word.
Avoid it.
Although there are certain moments when you can use this word.
6. Then
You can remove this word under certain conditions.
But only add it when it is needed.
❌ In 2019, I was an MPL pro player then In 2022, I become a digital writer.
âś…In 2019, I was an MPL pro player, in 2022, I become a digital writer.
You can remove this word under certain conditions.
But only add it when it is needed.
❌ In 2019, I was an MPL pro player then In 2022, I become a digital writer.
âś…In 2019, I was an MPL pro player, in 2022, I become a digital writer.
7. In order to
Why do you use “in order to” when you can say “to?"
Your “in order to” doesn’t add any extra value to your writing.
I'm pretty sure.
❌ In order to become a digital writer
âś… To become a digital writer
Why do you use “in order to” when you can say “to?"
Your “in order to” doesn’t add any extra value to your writing.
I'm pretty sure.
❌ In order to become a digital writer
âś… To become a digital writer
That's a wrap!
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