I just analyzed a guy with 100,000+ followers o Twitter...
And he writes the BEST conversational copy on this platform.
The reason?
He follows a select few methods to capture, keep & make $$$ off your attention.
You can do this too.
That is, if you know this...
And he writes the BEST conversational copy on this platform.
The reason?
He follows a select few methods to capture, keep & make $$$ off your attention.
You can do this too.
That is, if you know this...
Of course, I'm talking about @GrammarHippy
In this thread, I will uncover all George's secrets for you...
I'll show you examples.
I'll write in his style.
...and to top things off, I'm also sharing tips he NEVER shared himself.
I'll get to that later.
But first off:
In this thread, I will uncover all George's secrets for you...
I'll show you examples.
I'll write in his style.
...and to top things off, I'm also sharing tips he NEVER shared himself.
I'll get to that later.
But first off:
@GrammarHippy George gets your attention by sparking curiosity.
How he does it?
He makes an intriguing promise & positions his thread as the bridge.
But he doesn't give you all details upfront.
He uncovers them throughout the thread.
Let me rephrase that:
How he does it?
He makes an intriguing promise & positions his thread as the bridge.
But he doesn't give you all details upfront.
He uncovers them throughout the thread.
Let me rephrase that:
@GrammarHippy George's holding a carrot on a stick right in front of you.
That's right. You're like a pig.
Or rather, he's teasing you like a naughty stripper.
He shows you just enough to create excitement...
...and promises to show you everything.
But just when you think you got it...
That's right. You're like a pig.
Or rather, he's teasing you like a naughty stripper.
He shows you just enough to create excitement...
...and promises to show you everything.
But just when you think you got it...
@GrammarHippy ...he creates another curiosity loop.
Excuse my French, but there's no better way of saying it:
George makes you feel like a little b*tch.
You're on your knees. Crawling. Drooling.
So haram.
But here's the thing...
Excuse my French, but there's no better way of saying it:
George makes you feel like a little b*tch.
You're on your knees. Crawling. Drooling.
So haram.
But here's the thing...
@GrammarHippy It's entertaining to read.
By the way, are you paying attention?
Since my 1st tweet, I've used 7 of George's techniques on you.
If you don't see them now, don't worry, I'll uncover them later...
But I'll tell you one of them:
By the way, are you paying attention?
Since my 1st tweet, I've used 7 of George's techniques on you.
If you don't see them now, don't worry, I'll uncover them later...
But I'll tell you one of them:
@GrammarHippy Remember my first tweet?
I promised you I'd tell you all secrets of George's writing style.
I made a promise.
You got curious.
Then you read the thread.
George does this all the time.
But that's not what makes him unique...
I promised you I'd tell you all secrets of George's writing style.
I made a promise.
You got curious.
Then you read the thread.
George does this all the time.
But that's not what makes him unique...
@GrammarHippy "Nils, please let me go, I'm tired of reading your copy"
Sure. Leave.
But will you really be able to resume scrolling?
You were only 30 seconds away from learning the secret to conversational writing...
Will you be able to sleep?
Okay, I get it.
Let me get to the point...
Sure. Leave.
But will you really be able to resume scrolling?
You were only 30 seconds away from learning the secret to conversational writing...
Will you be able to sleep?
Okay, I get it.
Let me get to the point...
@GrammarHippy George masters 3 techniques.
What? Only 3?
Yes.
Firstly, he keeps you engaged.
He averages 1 question asked per tweet.
And he tells you what to do.
Read that again.
Or not.
Fine.
He's like a military drill leader shouting at tired soldiers...
What? Only 3?
Yes.
Firstly, he keeps you engaged.
He averages 1 question asked per tweet.
And he tells you what to do.
Read that again.
Or not.
Fine.
He's like a military drill leader shouting at tired soldiers...
@GrammarHippy ...you can't ever let your guard down.
Otherwise...
JAB!
This is a powerful method to hold readers' attention.
But the second & third techniques are even stronger...
Otherwise...
JAB!
This is a powerful method to hold readers' attention.
But the second & third techniques are even stronger...
@GrammarHippy Based on this thread, can you guess the other techniques?
If not...
I'm either a terrible writer or you're a lazy reader.
Anyway...
George's second technique is switching sentence length and rhytm.
Like this:
If not...
I'm either a terrible writer or you're a lazy reader.
Anyway...
George's second technique is switching sentence length and rhytm.
Like this:
@GrammarHippy Short, long, short, short.
Short. Long. Short.
He writes a long sentence, then a short sentence, then a long sentence.
See?
Now for the 3rd, mightiest technique...
Short. Long. Short.
He writes a long sentence, then a short sentence, then a long sentence.
See?
Now for the 3rd, mightiest technique...
@GrammarHippy George is the but(t)-master.
He keeps you hooked by opening & closing curiosity loops throughout the thread.
All. The. Time.
It's like watching a thriller, without the thriller.
How he does it?
He keeps you hooked by opening & closing curiosity loops throughout the thread.
All. The. Time.
It's like watching a thriller, without the thriller.
How he does it?
@GrammarHippy 1) He makes mini-promises within the thread.
2) He finishes each thread tweet with a cliffhanger
3) He uses "..." all the time.
He uses phrases like:
"But...
Now...
Let me show you 1 thing before you go..."
But before you go, there's 1 more thing I want to show you:
2) He finishes each thread tweet with a cliffhanger
3) He uses "..." all the time.
He uses phrases like:
"But...
Now...
Let me show you 1 thing before you go..."
But before you go, there's 1 more thing I want to show you:
@GrammarHippy I promised you to give you some plug & play methods to make your writing conversational.
Here they are:
• Use 1 word sentences. Seriously.
• End tweets with transitional phrases
• Ask questions to the reader
• Tell the reader what to do
Stop. Don't leave just yet...
Here they are:
• Use 1 word sentences. Seriously.
• End tweets with transitional phrases
• Ask questions to the reader
• Tell the reader what to do
Stop. Don't leave just yet...
@GrammarHippy I wanted to thank you for reading.
I appreciate you.
If you got this far, there's 0 reasons for not following me @nilsliedlich
(George, that's also true for you!)
Have a great day,
Nils
I appreciate you.
If you got this far, there's 0 reasons for not following me @nilsliedlich
(George, that's also true for you!)
Have a great day,
Nils
@GrammarHippy I went from high school kid to 5-figure digital builder in 5 months.
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If you want to grow 1% wiser every Monday, subscribe:
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