1. Kieran's story:
Why it works:
•Each sentence is brief and easy to read
•The story evokes emotion over and over
•He shows you how he transformed (and you can too)
Why it works:
•Each sentence is brief and easy to read
•The story evokes emotion over and over
•He shows you how he transformed (and you can too)
2. Adi's story
Why it works:
•The story relates to problems people have - and solves them
•The story is broken down into actionable lessons
•Adi uses "pacing" to make each lesson flow
Why it works:
•The story relates to problems people have - and solves them
•The story is broken down into actionable lessons
•Adi uses "pacing" to make each lesson flow
3. Tanmay's Story
Why it works:
•Tanmay uses an introduction that hooks the attention
•The story is memorable because it alters different emotions
•It shares lessons learned from his struggles, so you don't have to struggle
Why it works:
•Tanmay uses an introduction that hooks the attention
•The story is memorable because it alters different emotions
•It shares lessons learned from his struggles, so you don't have to struggle
4. Dakota's Story
Why it works:
•Dakota shares vulnerable lessons which stir emotions
•Dakota shows you the power of transformation through struggle
•Dakota uses the "Movie Time" style by combining action, meaning, & pictures
Why it works:
•Dakota shares vulnerable lessons which stir emotions
•Dakota shows you the power of transformation through struggle
•Dakota uses the "Movie Time" style by combining action, meaning, & pictures
5. Dickie's Story
Why it works:
•Dickie makes the story relatable to a common struggle
•Dickie challenges the status quo of most gyms
•Dickie uses one easy-to-digest lesson
Why it works:
•Dickie makes the story relatable to a common struggle
•Dickie challenges the status quo of most gyms
•Dickie uses one easy-to-digest lesson
6. Jon's Story
Why it works:
•Jon introduces conflict, and how to overcome it.
•The story uses descriptive language that makes it relatable.
•Jon portrays himself as a compelling and relatable character.
Why it works:
•Jon introduces conflict, and how to overcome it.
•The story uses descriptive language that makes it relatable.
•Jon portrays himself as a compelling and relatable character.
7. My Story (Shameless Plug)
Why it works:
•The hook uses numbers which creates interest.
•I used contradiction to show a rags-to-riches story.
•An easy-to-read step-by-step breakdown makes it actionable.
Why it works:
•The hook uses numbers which creates interest.
•I used contradiction to show a rags-to-riches story.
•An easy-to-read step-by-step breakdown makes it actionable.
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